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Issue 2: June 2008

Editorial

 

Competition

 

David Anthony

Slush Pile

 

Alanna Blake

A Discontented Sonnet

 

Diana Brodie

Hi Darling! I'm on the Train

 

Joan Butler

Spring Kleening

BLLCK NKD

 

Tony Cloke

Lands of my Greatgrandfathers

 

Ann Drysdale

The Case for Light Verse

Between Dryden and Duffy

 

Bill Greenwell

The Recall of the Wild

 

Helena Nelson

Eight Tips for New Poets

 

Bob Newman

A Shameful Admission

 

D A Prince

Christopher Robin

 

Andy Proudfoot

House Sitting, An Apology

 

Hilary Sheers

Grandma Bling

 

George Simmers

Skin

For Your Eyes Only

 

Frances Thompson

The Disgruntled Lover

 

Emrys Westacott

Pteens for Ptolemy

 

Helen Whittaker

Perfect

 

John Whitworth

A Hangover and its Cure

 

 

 

 

 

A Discontented Sonnet

 

I am a sonnet and am very bored

At my confinement into fourteen lines

And following a pattern that defines

Such narrow limits that they leave me floored.

 

No wonder those poetic forms have scored

In popularity whose lax designs

Allow them freedom outwith their confines,

Fresh opportunities to be explored.

 

There comes a time for sonnets to rebel,

To add some colour to the monotone

Of ancient strictures that have hemmed them in.

I will be first to break that classic spell,

To move where other, freer forms have gone.

Though some will judge it heresy and sin

 

I’ll add one more couplet and alter the rhythm

And, damn me, I won’t even make myself rhyme!

 

 

 

Alanna Blake